Thursday, April 19, 2007

No one in particular, but thanks for asking

A barb, careless, thrown in the air
Hit its target, he barely knew where
As he shrugged, looked away,
Still her heart bleeds today
And he can't yet be bothered to care

His words made her furious, pissed
Her blood boiling, seething, she hissed
I can send you to hell
You deserve it so well
And the world would forget you exist

Apology's not in his game
In comparison, grizzlies are tame
So with much delight
She will kill him tonight
Justice comes with him screaming her name
.

11 comments:

Ghasheema said...

men need someone or something to slap some sense into them =D


beautifully written sweety

bobbarama said...

Oh, whoa. Someone messed up. Nice limerick, though. Hope things work your way.

Janna said...

Ghasheema: LOL! Thanks. :)

Bobbarama: Glad you liked it. :)

Mr. Fabulous said...

Cheery!

Matt-Man said...

Thanks for starting my weekend with a big old smile. Cheers Janna!!

Lynda said...

I bet he blamed PMS. :)

Danielle said...

"Justice comes in screaming her name"
Great line reminds me of Dido. Real old school Euripides' play Medea was produced in 431 BCE.

no one in particular said...

Cut me to the quick
little words carry big stick

Janna said...

Mr. Fab: Cheery AND Eerie!

Matt-man: It's the 2nd best way to start off your day with a smile!

Lynda: Men are like that.

Danielle: Wow, 431 BC was WAY before McDonalds was invented. I wonder what people ate...

No One: Nice! And it's more than six words! :)

Travis said...

**keeps an eye on the scary woman from Michigan**

Janna said...

Travis: You have to sleep SOMETIME... I'll be waiting. :)